LET ME TELL YA'LL A STORY

ok i was just writing some stuff and decided to post it (i was bored, and decided to work on my story tellin/topical shit)

tell me if there was anything ya'll liked ...i think the last couple bars, i shouldve worded it up better ..but its just a keystyle idc lol

NOW THIS IS ABOUT A DUDE BOUND FA THAT GLORY ROAD, GREAT AT EVERYTHING HE DID, EVEN WHEN HE PIMPED HE ALWAYS HAD LIKE 40 HOES/

lol..THIS IS HOW THE STORY GOESSS......


latley me and my moms got some hardships, cause of my brothas car flip/
just about a month ago, on the way home from a bar trip/

off a dark bridge/
he darted from hittin a bull's (eye), so its ironic he died 2 blocks
away from a target/

now these feelings i got fa' god are tarnished/
21 years old, 1 year away from graduatin college/

he was destined ta go the farthest, he was technicaly the smartest/
and when it came to his passion, at rappin.. he was definately the hardest/

taught me everything i knew, even got me started/
always said i'd make it bigga than him and i'd reply stop being retarded/

tell me how the games changin fast and needs a new artist/
and when he went ova my lines, he'd say you got this and read part of it/

my brothas known by famous rappers but neva got a mega deal/
but since that tragedy happened, our city passed a major bill/

i stay clear of that junk, so when im at a party and someone comes ta me like here's some beer in a cup/
i look right eye ta eye wit 'em and start tearin up/

and i'll miss my brotha aslong as im on earth and he's in heaven without me
almost everynight you can see me pouting/
bent ova wit his picture shouting,i love you brotha..thats foreva undoubtdly/

nice topical dude...overall good read,i enjoyed it.


PCE

thanks sis....