Number of posts : 58 Age : 39 Location : Beautiful B.C. (Canada) Wins-Losses : 2-0 Crew : Free Agent Registration date : 2008-09-30
Subject: R.eal A.rtistic P.rogress Wed Oct 22, 2008 11:18 am
Kickin' rhymes so fresh you know they stick in minds If you ain't sick in ya head, you better believe i'm sick in mine..
...WHAAAAAAT??!!
I blaze all day n' play it 'Kool' like 'G Rap,' belie' dat All you bloodsucker's ain't ever gon' bleed Matt! So fuck off if you' beefin' wit' me man 'cause I don't need that I'm only here to get fed n' give that feed back! Smoke weed, hash, relax, eat snacks n' speak crass Leave facts n' teach cats to flee the scene fast! We cast weak ass weak acts that mainly seem wack Wacker than 'em bitches who claim they've seen Pac! Meanwhile, I've been patiently waitin' for Shady's' "Relapse" I ain't gonna front, this man's a fan of how crazy HE raps! When lazy me naps don't wake me or i'll be the first one ya see snap Some of you so slow I bet you ain't ever worried 'bout a speed trap!
Cassidy Admin
Number of posts : 108 Age : 34 Location : Elyria,Ohio Wins-Losses : 100-0 Crew : Lyrical-Kingdom Registration date : 2008-09-25
my lyrics bring chills in, this geek feels men, plus only time a ripper/rippa next ta stardom is co-hostin wit regis philbin/
1. This bar's stretched. 2. "feels men," rhymes wit', "Philbin", It's feel, not fill... that's called a stretch. 3. Not a very good concept.
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
my words'll have ya 6 feet deep and curled, plus i'll sleep ya verbal/ and history tells me im good, cause all ripper eva beat was girls/
I get it, you Wiki'ed JACK The Ripper. Very funny.
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
see im direct when im smashin, ya'll like it when im wreckin this faggot/ plus i'll put hands on ya man's head like inspector gadget/
Who's "y'all?" Cassidy and KrAzYeYeZ?
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
leave this whore wrecked, wit his bored text, dawg you a snore-fest!/ and playin grand theft auto is the only time you next ta a core vet/ (corvette)
Good set up line.. punch was wack... basically just said you're not a "core vet."
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
and wit ya first name bein the same thing that protects a door step, dawg you fake and weak/ so i guess its natural that you always tend ta taste da feet/(defeat)
Always tend? This would only be my second battle here, and check it, i'm winning my battle wit' KrazyEyez... but this site doesn't have enough people to get that third vote in.
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
see im beatin this kid, limbs peakin his skin/ what i tell ya?, you dont want me ta lidell ya and take my knee ta ya chin/
Limbs peakin' my skin? What? Lol... also was no punch there.
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
ima smash dude, show you what the mack do!!/ cryin ova an e loss, son i dont put it past you!!/
The mack? LMAO... this wasn't a punch, either.
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
me weep ova an l? oops i neva had to/ have this site like damn he just smacked you!!, and now all im doin is laughin at matthew!!/
Very, very, very stretched bar lacking word play or a punch.
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
hes a newbie faggot!, and i knew hed gag it!/ he a dissapointment, thats why im dissin n pointin wit my uzi at him/
Dude, you're a fat white boy (no offence), you ain't got no uzi to point at anyone... so why would you drop that shit? Now you lookin' wack AND fake!
Hungry aka The Hired Gun wrote:
so you betta correct ya speech, before i wreck ya text wit heat/ and creep in ya home, put the peice to ya dome and have ya brains messin up ya sheets/
Stretched... more fake gangsta talk about guns n' shit... lame, tbh.
Overall... I seen you tryin' to use some word play, which usually ended up in a weaker punch... lots of stretched bars, and some bars were lacking hits... i'd say out of 10 bars, only 3 were really direct.
Cassidy Admin
Number of posts : 108 Age : 34 Location : Elyria,Ohio Wins-Losses : 100-0 Crew : Lyrical-Kingdom Registration date : 2008-09-25
lol..i look like a beast in that one! haha..but yeah you are now officially on my nuts SMH at you having pic of me in you photobucket! come on i think you hiding something?
Hungry aka The Hired Gun Middle weight
Number of posts : 59 Age : 35 Location : DesMoines, Iowa Wins-Losses : 2-0 Crew : Free Agent Registration date : 2008-09-30
fuck this i just voted on one of your battles on that other site fuck all this beef lets start a crew over there..if we joined forces..NO LIE..itd be tough to beat us...
The Ripper Newbie
Number of posts : 58 Age : 39 Location : Beautiful B.C. (Canada) Wins-Losses : 2-0 Crew : Free Agent Registration date : 2008-09-30
Subject: Re: R.eal A.rtistic P.rogress Mon Oct 27, 2008 1:26 am
No, no... you voted for me in that battle because my verse wasn't the greatest, but you voted right... and I give you props for that... but bruh, seriously, you came into my thread and claimed this was a "dumb ass lil poem".. yet on that same forum, you voted for me in, I was getting lots of props from people telling me i've upped my game and that i'm showin' a huge improvement... and that was just a quick key'ed piece.... so i'm happy with it... you, on the other hand, just pissed on it, so you can consider our beef over, i'm down with that... but still... man to man... fuck you!
It's all love!
1'
Hungry aka The Hired Gun Middle weight
Number of posts : 59 Age : 35 Location : DesMoines, Iowa Wins-Losses : 2-0 Crew : Free Agent Registration date : 2008-09-30
Subject: Re: R.eal A.rtistic P.rogress Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:25 am
first off i never went on that other site and said anything about this poem? i just left it alone..outta respect?..cause i figured what the point of caring over beef from another site and shit..
oh and btw i only came in here sayin it was a lil ass poem cause i was heated because you was duckin our battle..but w/e thats the past idk ..
and btw i voted on your battle because you was simply better than the other dude...i never dickride homie..i keep it real everyday..
The Ripper Newbie
Number of posts : 58 Age : 39 Location : Beautiful B.C. (Canada) Wins-Losses : 2-0 Crew : Free Agent Registration date : 2008-09-30
I'm so LYRICAL, the JERICHO will make a cripple walk like a MIRACLE
The Ripper Newbie
Number of posts : 58 Age : 39 Location : Beautiful B.C. (Canada) Wins-Losses : 2-0 Crew : Free Agent Registration date : 2008-09-30
Subject: Re: R.eal A.rtistic P.rogress Tue Oct 28, 2008 1:27 am
Quit bein' a bitch, already, homo.
Don't make me murk you, son, my tongue's a nine mil. n' everyone knows that even YOU think that I'M ill! Ooooooooh... n' the truth has finally been key'd You can try me again, son, but you won't succeed! You suck, see??? Motherfucker, I buck G's I don't duck geeks like you, you're considered lucky! Lyrically I crush geeks like you, nah, i'm nice, but I ain't THAT nice, dude He wantin' to start a crew wit' me?? Bitch, I don't even like you! Lyrically, i'm lettin' 'em know (lettin' Em know) i'm like Proof n' I'd probably have to show you how to hold a mic, goof! I spit n' I write truth... We can tell by your front, you don't even need to admit that you' white, dude! My insight's rude, yea'.. y'all KNOW this dyke's huge but even if I was Hungry, I wouldn't bite you! And even if we did battle again, I'm makin' it known,.. you're shyte, dude Your achilles heel is that you actually believe your own hype, douche! I write smooth flows, all your flows is terrible My punches keep improvin', yours ain't even comparable! Havin' to read your bullshit's unbearable, but we do what we gotta do You' wack n' you' actin' gangsta, but you' the one gettin' shot at, goon!
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