so much time to FINE~TUNE/Critiqued~every~Line Squeaked~every~Nine/bitch you'll see the Signs~Soon/your fuckin RHYME'S~RUINED/the TRUTH~in~the~BOOTH/no LIE~when~I~SPIT now WHY~would~I~QUIT-----
that was nice, the verse was a nice one cuz u find what a real rapper is about in there ciphers, nice shit, keep it up some usefull stuff is just elevate ya vocab to make it harder and add some similies